Forest of DDDDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!! by HI_I_like_Text-Adcentures :)

Comment HI_I_like_Text-Adcentures :)

LOOK DOWN AT THE FIRST COMMENT FIRST!!! \/
Ok now that you have read that I would like to say that the changes I made to the original version where basically; 1. I changed the stuff that kind of reminds people of 'Over the garden wall' By changing the words, and 2. fixing how somethings needed caps lock and some didn't. and Also about the recoronation that ummmmmmmmmmm I couldn't find out how to fix that so if anyone finds out where that happens then I will gladly fix it :) Thank you! :)

Comment HI_I_like_Text-Adcentures :)

READ THIS!!!
Ok so I kind of made the version that Sino555 saw then saved it then saw my mistakes and then deleted the stuff that was wrong and then I got of the computer and then got back on and published it. (without checking the project) And then because the computer didn't save the changes I made. So Sino555 Saw the original verry bad version. So PLEASE help me bring this project's ratting back up. :)
Thank you! :)

Review Sino555_likes_text-adventures

I like the idea of it, but there is many problems. First up is the coding. I played on a path where flower died and she died AGAIN. WHAT?! AND IT'S NOT LIKE A SPIRIT DEATH IN WARIORS. NO, IT'S A FLIPING SECOND LIVING DEATH?! Second is that the village where they trespass on, with eastern gorillas in pumpkin costumes, is just a ridicules ripe of "Over the Garden Wall". Third is the grammar. It is really, terribly bad. I can barley understand what's going on. Overall, good idea, but the actually game is really bad. The only reason I give it 2 stars is the idea. I-WAIT! This idea sounds like OVER THE GARDEN WALL AGAIN! ACKKKKK! 1 STAR NOW, ONE STAR!