Delphi by nathand

Welcome to Delphi. Please, empty your pockets, brush your teeth, and comb your hair before you begin.
Review Emipop325
12 Mar 2015
Excellent story line and detail, but there was no solid outcome or explanation as to why any of this is happening - that was annoying! I played all possible choices and there was no ending; not really anyway, he just kept going home! But still, the writing was good.

Review Ranique
31 Jan 2015
I don't get it

Review adrao
11 Jan 2015
An interesting little story, I like its style and pace, though some of the story-lines are definitively too short...

Review onionmachine
24 Jul 2014
The text is good. I do prefer longer stories, but this is short and sweet. I do wish you edit the language, and perhaps more on the road bike option.

09 Jul 2014
This story is short, sweet and to the point. It offers many diffrent choices all with diffrent outcomes.

Review naradi
02 Jul 2014
umm....... a bit of bad language for an "everyone" rated story, but overall pretty good. Nice and short.

Review Manny_D
02 Jul 2014
so great : *insert minimum ten characters*

Review Tom C.L.
26 Jun 2014
I enjoy short gamebooks like this. I absolutely loved it.

Review outlandish
14 Jun 2014
Very interesting story and world. I enjoyed trying the different choices. It was very short but it would be great to know more about this world and character.

28 May 2014
Amazing Storytelling,but that fell short.
The Story is very small,and much smaller than I expected.
Its like Showing us an amazing burger,looks fantastic,but you can't taste it because its even lesser than half a bite.
Its really a shame,because this story had lots of potential.

Review clair244
26 May 2014
I loved this! Eerie futuristic atmosphere, compelling storyline...I was so intrigued that I went through all the pathways! The only flaw, if you were to consider it a flaw, was that it was too short. The world the author created was so interesting that I wanted to find out more!

25 May 2014
An excellent game. The storytelling is certainly worthy of a 5/5 rating, but I do wish we were able to learn more. Still, it ends conclusively and I enjoyed playing through the options.

Comment Sherlock300
19 May 2014
This is so well written. I love it! Fantastic job.

Comment Rhimwill
13 May 2014
I love the concept for this game; the computer telling you how your day will be before it even happens. I wish there was a way to actually get to Susanna somehow, but I also kind of understand that the point is probably to make Mr. Jenkins feel quite hopeless about his life XD
Also, just wanted to mention that neither of the bicycle endings have restart buttons.

Review georgek
10 Apr 2014
Strong writing, an unreliable narrator, and a convincing setting combined to make me replay this more than a few times, which I rarely do with choice games (in Delphi each passage offers just two choices). I'm not even sure if this game is 'winnable' (I surely didn't) but winning doesn't seem to be the point. I would really like to play more Quest games like this, and I'm looking forward to what the author does next.

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