Calm the evil by Reidolol

Comment Reidolol

This is the worst game i made, and english is not my first language.

Comment Crispin

I would give this about two stars, mainly because the grammar is extremely poor. I can get the gist of what is happening in the story, but it is very difficult to read because verb tense is inconsistent, the pronouns (I, he, you, etc) are inconsistent and I am not sure who is doing what in your story, and punctuation is deficient. Also, in the opening sequence you introduce screws, a coin, and blood, that don't seem to appear again.

Comment Reidolol

thanks zacxradsf

Comment ZacxradSF

I get "calm the evil" :-D

Review ZacxradSF

I survived! Good story!:-D