The Temple by madamluna

Review by nidhi kaur

The story line of this game would be really good, if the creator made this better. The description align with the story, because in the beginning, the creator didn't describe the character or what they were doing there. The punctuation was off, and there next to no capitalization. Most of the story composed run-on sentences and part of the sentence would be written in past tense, and the rest in present tense.

Review by Em the Jewel

This story was really bad