Omg this game is soo good. I loved the actual book that was based on this and alsways wanted a sequel. The only problem i saw here was the last part, were it says you hear crying, is that the end? i think you should make it more clear.
The plot of the story was quite interesting, and while I was playing, I wanted to find out what happened next. The story itself was quite short, and I was disappointed when it finished so quickly. The grammar and punctuation could use some work, but the choices in the story where important and contributed to the game. I recommend that you play this game if you are short on time, and want to do something fun.