Anglo Saxon's by #awesomecricketer

Comment XanMag

This probably should have been created as a CYOA not a TA. This could have some good potential as a TA... kind of make it like a "Bill and Ted's" kind of adventure. However... as it is, I didn't find much adventure in it as it was a simple click your way through. So, my humble advice, either work on it and turn it into a clever text adventure where the player can explore, or make it a little more segmented and turn it into a choose your own adventure. So, instead of simply clicking 'go to battlefield' and print a lengthy message about the battlefield/army, send the player on a clickable journey. Go to battlefield --> look at warriors/leader --> inquire about army --> examine weapons, etc etc.

If you choose, it may be worth exploring different routes with this and polishing it up. If you do, feel free to ask questions on the forum - lots of helpful people there! Good luck!