Dude, khygann, whats the point, i see no direction in this story, but starting in the woods is ok, what about that u make an other story of like living whit the creepypastas, that sally brings u to them, and that u have a like roleplay whit them for him/her.
Email me on [email protected] if someone wants some help whit ideas, i have LOTS of them.
So need help, i help!
Lacks flair and style, but functional. It gets the basics down, but nothing more. The short length means there's added incentive to quickly play again, but you will still get a very average experience.
Couldn't get into the "story" as it just seems very random at times and doesn't have a real direction. Lacks imagination and doesn't pull the reader in to it at all.