Battle Scars (A Warrior Cats tale) by blueskies555

This game was added to the Sandpit for the following reason: Incomplete

The game appears to be unfinished, or is a demo of a longer work which has not yet been completed. Once the game has been completely written, it may be re-categorised.

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You play as a warrior of ThunderClan.
This is my first game so I'm really sorry if its bad...
It's a work in progress; though its obvious...

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Review SomeUkranian

18 Oct 2022

Great game indeed, waiting for it to finish

Review IvyIsNotPoisonIvy

14 Jul 2021

I loved it It was amazing you should make more story game thingamajigs

Comment SnowyFlare

19 Dec 2020

is it just me or does the game stop after eveningpelt says to go to the medicine den??

either way the game is amazing and I loved the story I was kind of upset that it ended so soon though

Review Emberstrike102

30 Sep 2020

Love it! It is super realistic and entertaining as well as very fun!

Comment Waterstar

26 Aug 2020

hi someone

Review STORMalsoTHELIONGUARDGIRL1209

27 Jun 2020

AWSOME!!!!!plz continue,but if your hurt or sick plz wait till your better and i'm not just saying that i promise

Review Shade'Eye

04 Jun 2020

"In my opinion, it's a really good game. Sadly tho, that there's no pictures describing the story paths, but it's still cool.
Any ways it was a nice story, that much, that when I reached the end of it, I was kinda sad cuz i enjoyed it… :/
Keep the great work and continue the story plz.
Cya!"
~Shade'Eye (Shadow Clan warrior)

Comment gw706castudents.us

27 May 2020

yes plz add those in. much more fun if you do.

Review PurpletailTC12

23 Apr 2020

Plz add more like mate kits plz

Comment Wild warrior paws

17 Apr 2020

I love the action!! There were two that’s, but overall it was awesome!

Sincerely,
Wild warrior paws 🐾

Review Peach

13 Apr 2020

It was a pretty good game, I loved the action!

Comment Peach

13 Apr 2020

It wasn't my favourite, but I might want to try playing it again!

Comment 132

13 Apr 2020

I like this game but I am not done with reading the series et so please do not spoil it I am on the new prophecy

Comment Featherstrike

10 Apr 2020

Good story, few grammar mistakes here and there, but i REALLY LIKE IT! keep working on it!

Review Mycatisabird

09 Apr 2020

It's an alright story, but it definitely has that WIP feel to it. I noticed you kept using the wrong your/you're and a couple other grammar mistakes, which could be fixed with a bit of studying/practice. This may be a bit of a nitpick, but the names seemed a bit boring. Prefixes/suffixes aren't limited to whatever was used in the main books, but really anything that a cat could reasonably know of- even kittypet name prefixes if you ever write about Skyclan. Otherwise, this game seems really nice, and could probably be amazing if it's ever finished.

Review warri0rcats

08 Apr 2020

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment Lizardstrike

03 Apr 2020

how come it ended at choose your friend?

Review Misterfox

14 Mar 2020

Finish!!! Please!!!

Review Detective

11 Mar 2020

coolio indeed

Comment Dark thorn

11 Mar 2020

Im on this site for my first time and I think that because of this briliant story I will stay here for a while. Hope you will finish it ^^

Comment Dawnclas

10 Mar 2020

Oop- i typed my name wrong, its supposed to be Dawnstar

Review Dawnclas

10 Mar 2020

This is an amazing game! I really hope you finish it, keep up the good work!

Review SkyfeatherOC

09 Mar 2020

AMAZING!!! IF YOU DON`T MAKE THE NEXT I WILL FLIP OUT!!!!!!!!!!!

Review scarly woods

26 Feb 2020

I love this so much, please finish! Also, could you review my game here
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/y0vydyz_yeotyn8ckpvo0w/warrior-cats-game-moonray-clan-part-1-3
I would like a few opinions on it and how I can make it better.

Review Warrioroftherainbow

05 Jan 2020

It`s a really good game, and I would like to see the battle for thunderclan winning the sunningrocks again. If you finish it, I would definetly give it 5 stars! Keep on the good work, Blueskie555!

Comment villaindeku

03 Jan 2020

This is a really great game!

Review SilverStone the dragon

10 Oct 2019

This is a really good warrior cat game, but if you finish it then I'm definitely going to give it 5 stars!!!👍

Review Moonlillic

10 Oct 2019

its amazing but i hated that there was a clift hanger becuase it wasnt finished

Comment Moonflower

08 Oct 2019

It’s really realistic and fun to play so far keep up the great work on the game 👍

Comment WarriorCatLover123456

24 Sep 2019

So ready to see what happens next god bless you and I believe
you can make this the best game ever!

Review Storm E. Skies

05 Aug 2019

So cute! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Review Cinderstarry

24 Jul 2019

I love the story so far! keep up the good work! <3

Review Lightningfur

08 Jul 2019

I loved it! I hope you'll be finishing it soon.

Comment Moonstar 123

16 Jun 2019

It was great but............. PLEASE FINISH IT!!!!! It's a great story it disservice a ending so please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please finish it.

Comment Flameblaze

27 May 2019

It was good I would finish it if I were you.

Comment Diamondblaze

28 Apr 2019

I love it I love it! BUT FINISH FOR THE SAKE OF STARCLAN!!!!!! @$#%&*^! ( I did NOT say that!)

Comment Dawnclaw7

15 Apr 2019

Amazing 😉

Review Dawnclaw7

15 Apr 2019

Please finish it was so good 😊

Review Wolfieanimations12

14 Apr 2019

It was amazing!And well written

Comment Wolfieanimations12

14 Apr 2019

This was a good game i like it

Review Lovepaw

26 Mar 2019

IF U DON'T FINISH, I WILL CRY SO DANG BAD!!! FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Review Smokewing

19 Feb 2019

This. Was. Amazing!!! You must finish this, i cannot live without knowing how it ends. Greatest warriors game ive ever played. EVER.

Review Dalmation222

07 Jan 2019

Its the best warriors game i have played so far. You need to finish it. Its amazing

Review ShadowFlare

02 Jan 2019

Very good please finish please!

Comment ShadowFlare

02 Jan 2019

Very good,please finish and let us choose our name and kits names if we have them.And how many kits we have.Maybe 1-5 or something.appart from that it's very good!

Comment HOPEWA

18 Dec 2018

Great great great game i could stay playing this game all day.

Comment Darkxbreeze

23 Nov 2018

It was soo good, cant wait for it to finish!

Comment Flower fox

26 Sep 2018

It's fun but iz can't go forward more after sunning rock has been taken!!!!

Review TinyBird

16 Aug 2018

It was pretty great-not finished, but I could care less. It was fun to mess around with. :3

Review Stormclaw

25 Jul 2018

Great game please finish
Can we mate and have kits
And become leader please

Comment Stormclaw

25 Jul 2018

Amazing game
Please finish
Can we have kits
And become leader please

Comment Warriorcatsforever

25 Jul 2018

love it i want more also you have inpired me to make one to thanks!

Review Stormblaze

03 Jul 2018

Sandpit? I don’t think so! This is unfinished, but it was AMAZING! I LOVED this a lot! Please continue! I’m looking forward to it! ^^

Review NatyCaty22

18 Jun 2018

I loved it! I wanted it to go on forever! I also want to have kits with the person I liked in the game... It was awesome!

Comment Heartmist

03 Jun 2018

Really awesome kerp up the good work

Comment Sparrowblaze

31 May 2018

Keep up the good work! It was awesome!

Review flamekit

20 May 2018

It was amazing please continue

Comment Winterfern

12 May 2018

Cool can you add more?

Comment River-the-rouge-kit

06 May 2018

I like it! It looks asu put a lot of work in it! Ty! Rlly good simulator!

Comment Darkstar121

02 May 2018

fun and cool

Comment jordanrichards320

28 Apr 2018

Great game! Just wish it was a bit longer.

Review SparrowWind

22 Apr 2018

This was an amazing game, you should do this more often! :3

Comment SparrowWind

22 Apr 2018

Nice, what happens next?

Review goldenlolipop

15 Apr 2018

It's great! Would want it to continue!

Comment carrot1211

10 Apr 2018

is good, but I always get stuck on one part...

Review Firepowered_Warrior

04 Apr 2018

This is amazing!! I would love to see this continue!!

Comment dovespirit

26 Mar 2018

How do you do this!!! :( Im new and need help.

Review dovespirit

26 Mar 2018

This is amazing!! PLEASE. ADD. MORE!

Review C Y A N S AK U R A

18 Mar 2018

The story-line in this is great! There may be some grammatical errors, but overall I don't think it's that noticeable. This is based on the main four clan and isn't exactly correct, but I think it won't matter. As long as the story-line is good and the writing is great! This is also your first time, so I don't blame you. Keep it up! Excited for the full release.

Review Blackmoon

14 Mar 2018

I love it!

Comment Bluestar07

13 Mar 2018

UMMM THE GAME STOPPED WHEN EVENINGFLIGHT SAID, "YOU SHOULD GO IN THERE NOW."

Review emi804

19 Feb 2018

This is great.
I played it twice now just for the sake of it.
There are four love interests from what I saw so far.

Good work. I can't wait to see the next updates! :3

Review Leaf Kaspers

18 Feb 2018

I loved it, probably because i’m a cat fan. but still! that was really cool! I hope the creator of this game will make more games like this! ;3 -
-Leaf

Review catcentaur160

14 Feb 2018

It was really good but I'm sad you didn't finish it. I like that it's not in the main series, but still warriors. Please finish it!

Comment Lilystar

10 Feb 2018

I BEG YOU PLEASE FINNISH!!!!!!!!!

Review archerqueen08

23 Jan 2018

Eh, I didn't really like the writing. It isn't Warriors itself (I should know, I used to be a huge Warriors fan myself), but the author wrote everything as if at a distance.

Comment SilverPool_The_Warrior

23 Jan 2018

THAT IS COOL PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THE SERIES!!!

Review KnowItAll

16 Jan 2018

It would be an amazing storyline if you continued to the series.

Review Lilystar

01 Jan 2018

PLEASE FINNISH THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD

Comment Silentsong527

28 Dec 2017

It was hilarious!!! I love your brilliant ideas and funny quip. You should make more stories. My only request is that they are a little longer. =)

Comment Ravengamer27

17 Nov 2017

And I'm Ravenpaw.

Comment Ravengamer27

17 Nov 2017

Its a pretty cool game!

Comment pikachy

27 Oct 2017

so good :D

Comment Sunflight123

30 Sep 2017

ITS LIKE SO AMAZING

Review Frisk12345

28 Sep 2017

I really liked it. I'm definitely giving this 5 stars (especially for the people who rated 2 stars *cough**cough*) but this was a good, although uncompleted, sandpit game.

Review DawnEclipse

19 Sep 2017

Awesome and just wow

Review Cheetahheart

14 Aug 2017

This was a very good game, and I enjoyed it. I hope you make more games like this!

Review Snowcrystal5

20 May 2017

Overall this game was really good. From the story to the writing style, it all seemed so much like a real warrior cats book. Though, it is sometimes confusing because you don't get told you're a cat. but I do assume that if you are gonna play this game, then you should probably know what it's about. Because the title actually says "(A Warrior cats Tale)" And if your gonna play this, at least know what "Warrior Cats" is.

Comment Hamilton_Nerd_Eliza

28 Apr 2017

Can you tell me what you used to make this? I want to do something simalar, but I have NO CLUE how to do it.

Review MoonStar4700

11 Apr 2017

I really liked this game and I liked how easy it was to pick stuff. PLease update soon!

Comment Fireleaf

07 Mar 2017

Im BlueKit then im BluePaw Then im BlueFur Then Bluestar

Comment OMG_IM_NOT_A_DOG_06

11 Jan 2017

Wow! This is great! Please do finish this!

Comment Nightmist515

20 May 2016

Really good game, keep working, and it'll be a masterpiece!

Review Marzipan

18 May 2016

Incomplete, and commits the sin of all bad, annoying fanfic by jumping into a situation that only makes sense to those who have read the series, and throwing around lots of specialized terms and just assuming the reader will know what it's all about. This is not a Warrior Cats site. And not laying the basic groundwork any story needs for setting and characters is just bad writing, regardless.

Also, I'd recommend learning the difference between your and you're.

Comment Mistralsong

18 May 2016

well.... i like where its going so far. you just need to complete it!

Review Blahsadfeguie

28 Mar 2016

You're never told you're a cat, so I assumed I was a very confused human who somehow ended up in the wilderness and was randomly attacked by talking cats with no explanation. The game is infinitely more interesting that way. (Of course, just about anything would be infinitely more interesting, but I digress.)

The game, or what exists of it, is at least somewhat competent I guess? There are choices. The writing is... hmm. Well, hopefully you have learned from this early experiment by now and moved on to less juvenile endeavors.

Comment CraftyKat

12 Mar 2016

PLEASE!!!!!

I AM BEGGING YOU!!!!!

MAKE MORE!!!!!!!

Review nupmuk

30 Nov 2015

It's a good story with a decent amount of story lines.

Review CraftyKat

22 Jul 2015

I love it! Please make more!

Review xSeer of Heartx

19 Mar 2015

This is pretty good so far! It brought back some nice memories from the Warriors series, so I'd say the style of the writing is fairly similar, which I'm sure is what you're aiming for. Good job! :3