Battle Scars (A Warrior Cats tale) by blueskies555
This game was added to the Sandpit for the following reason: Incomplete
The game appears to be unfinished, or is a demo of a longer work which has not yet been completed. Once the game has been completely written, it may be re-categorised.
"In my opinion, it's a really good game. Sadly tho, that there's no pictures describing the story paths, but it's still cool.
Any ways it was a nice story, that much, that when I reached the end of it, I was kinda sad cuz i enjoyed it… :/
Keep the great work and continue the story plz.
Cya!"
~Shade'Eye (Shadow Clan warrior)
It's an alright story, but it definitely has that WIP feel to it. I noticed you kept using the wrong your/you're and a couple other grammar mistakes, which could be fixed with a bit of studying/practice. This may be a bit of a nitpick, but the names seemed a bit boring. Prefixes/suffixes aren't limited to whatever was used in the main books, but really anything that a cat could reasonably know of- even kittypet name prefixes if you ever write about Skyclan. Otherwise, this game seems really nice, and could probably be amazing if it's ever finished.
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