This is a good game, but how do you suddenly end up having kits? I'm so confused... Why does no one seem to care about your confusion? Or even ask who the father is? But other then that this is a good game :) I like how it's short and clear.
Umm it doesn't have any options its just three pages saying "This is a page type what you want here and create links" or something please write it it sounds like it would be really good.
At the end you can't choose your name other then Dewfeather also at the beginning someone called you Dawnpaw. The battle was quite short also but other then that i loved it, there were lots of interesting bits to the game and i hope you make one where you are a warrior also, I liked how every page had a choice that was great!!! :D it's really good :D
Seriously could you add a bit more also Cats can hunt rabbits in every clan not just Windclan and your mentor wouldn’t reject you for trying to catch prey. One other thing try update it and make it so you don’t get banished for warning the clan about something you think could be a threat! SO...
I love the game and find it fun to read, but try to make the pages shorter or just one or two. other then that i really enjoyed it and please keep updating it!!!
This is a great game, I can’t wait for the 2nd one!! It’s a great first game and I can’t wait to play the next game!!:) I would love it if it were a bit longer, though it’s amazing for a first game.
