A Young Boy Survival Guide to ZDay by D-Cool

Review by plipe

it's ok but unfinished so yeah

Review by Ozzy S.T.

Had to stop as it seems some of the links are not working. Example: "Ignore your mom and pick up your phone, probably something important". That one is not working.
Feels like there could be potential here, although there is room for improvement, especially in the writing itself, with attention needed in regards to grammar and just the overall writing style.
Thank you D-Cool, hope to see more of your work!