it's good to says it's wip but I wish there were more endings like maybe if you get the knife and hug asriel you could defect the attacks with a knife instead of nothing happening
it would be good but it's a bit um it misses some key details e.g. I was going to take a shower when it said it's not good taking my possessions into the bath. what possessions? would be really good if it was more detailed.