Warrior Cats: Rainkit by CraftyKat

This game was added to the Sandpit for the following reason: Too short

This game is too short to be put into a category. Players expect games not to be all over within a few seconds.
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You are Rainkit of WindClan, trying to become the best warrior you can be!

Feedback is greatly appreciated as this is my first gamebook. Enjoy!

Vesion 1.8
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Comment Thunderclan Fan!!
14 Aug 2019
CANT WAIT FOR THE REST!!! ❤️🐱
Review Thunderclan Fan!!
14 Aug 2019
I loved the game so far! It has a lot of potential and i cant wait for you to finish it! I also cant wait to see your creativity!
Such a fan of warrior cats! ❤️
Review Catlover4life
09 Jun 2019
This is good given I am very picky. This is impressive for your first project
Review Warriorcats908
06 May 2019
It is such a great game, I love it. Great job on creating something so great as your first project. Can't wait to see more of your wonderful game.
Review Lovepaw
26 Mar 2019
Finish it soon plzzzz. Add romance to plz..
Review Krystallix3
03 Mar 2019
This game could have potential. It’s sad how all the pathways end at the same thing though. Diversity is very important in making a good game. You did add more context and a different way before Rainkit becomes an apprentice, but that is all. You did make a good storyline though, even if it is not an original place, and even though it isn’t a more significant story, you made it reasonable.

You ended the game on an abrupt note. You could atleast add a note telling the player that the game is finished and will not be added to, or you could make it smooth into an ending easier. I also saw some spelling errors.
This could have been a great game, you just needed to put some more effort into it.
Review ThinkB4UHitMe123
07 Nov 2018
LOVE IT!!!! -Fan Girls-
Comment ThinkB4UHitMe123
07 Nov 2018
Love It Cant wait To play the rest Good Luck

~~Sayuri-Chan
Review BloodyHeart
13 Jun 2018
I like it!Please finish! And also, I just started and I have a question: when you were making this, did you put it down as text adventure or gamebook?
Review Heartmist
05 Jun 2018
Question why is this in the sandpit. It's way more than that
Comment Heartmist
02 Jun 2018
This is really great. I love warriors
Review EchoShine2
01 Apr 2018
This is a great start! I enjoyed it! I’m new here and wanted to know how to do it...I don’t understand.
Review ShinyBaby Umbreon
31 Mar 2018
I love it for what it is developed as so far .Continue on it pleaaassee
Review Thecatofallcats
06 Mar 2018
Short, and the plot is so plain.
Comment Bramblemoon
24 Dec 2017
Just something I'd thought I'd add. Could you check out my game?

If you search warrior cats it'll be the first one of the third page
Review Bramblemoon
24 Dec 2017
Pretty good so far as a warrior cat game can be, Besides a boring and unoriginal plot, the game is lovely, it's a huge relief to see a WC game with decent punctuation and grammar.

The Idea of cats living in a forest doesn't open for much creativity, so it's easier for games like this to be inadequate compared to games about humans; for example.

This is a pure example of why WC games are insignificant compared to other games on the sight. WC games need more creativity.
Comment Spirtual101
01 Dec 2017
AWESOME!!!
Review Neville Eric
10 Aug 2017
I love this! =D I hope you do finish this amazing little game!
Comment Hamilton_Nerd_Eliza
28 Apr 2017
No offense, it's good for a first try, but there a a few things that can be made to this.
Comment FizzyWhisker
01 Feb 2017
Just figured it out - lol
Comment FizzyWhisker
01 Feb 2017
I am new to text adventures! I don't know what to pick for a hyperlink like this, if somebody could answer that I'd appreciate it.
Comment OMG_IM_NOT_A_DOG_06
11 Jan 2017
I really like this.
Comment Misha120
22 Dec 2016
I love this game so far and sorry adout my old comment
Comment Misha120
22 Dec 2016
IT WONT LODE
Review MooCow
03 Jul 2016
I know the games i've published are silly and stupid, but I've learned a lot in the span of 3 years and seeing all these warrior cat games and the lack of imagination that come with them makes me want to create a real warrior cats game where you actually have an adventure, and there's an original plot, and character customization, that sort of thing. Really, this one was much better than the other ones I've seen but a gamebook really doesn't fit my idea of a warrior cats game, I used to love those books and they seem like the type of thing to be converted to a textadventure rpg of some sort, not a dull book of predetermined choices. That's just my thoughts.
Comment CraftyKat
26 May 2016
Sorry to hear you don't like it, Marzipan. I'm making another game with a better plot. *laughs sheepishly* This is pretty olllldddd.....
Review Marzipan
14 May 2016
Same dull, regurgitated plot as every other Warrior Cats game I've seen, except this one at least had an author that understood punctuation and grammar so that's a single point in its favor. The dead ends I kept hitting were a major issue though. Of course this is highly rated despite a lack of...pretty much everything that makes for an engaging story because WC fans are unable to apply critical thinking to even the blandest attempts to ape the series they worship.

I guess after they got banned from chooseyourstory, the Quest site has become their new refuge. Though this one at least is better than average in the technical sense.
Comment StarStyleCakeyMiner
14 May 2016
Its also nice to see a different point of view.
Comment StarStyleCakeyMiner
14 May 2016
Me too! I just started reading the series and I love it already! Keep up the great work!
Review Nutjitzu
04 May 2016
Awesone!!:-D
I love the warriors series, sept i'm more of a thunder clan than a wind. ;)
Comment BLueTemper20422042
04 May 2016
I love these books, ty
Comment weepop
20 Apr 2016
Me too! GO WARRIORS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review weepop
20 Apr 2016
I love it!Just needs a secne where you become a warrior!
Comment CraftyKat
08 Aug 2015
So do I! Glad to meet another fan. :D
Review Malissarulz
06 Aug 2015
I love Warriors!
Comment Malissarulz
06 Aug 2015
I love Warriors!
Review Elite Tech
24 Jul 2015
I only played through part of the game, and I'm not to familiar with Warrior Cats but so far it's pretty good! Very few spelling mistakes, and a nice amount of depth. Keep updating!
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CraftyKat
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Added 17 Jun 2015
Updated 04 Sep 2019

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