She Met a Girl by perlacorral98

Short story in which you play as Lucy, a lesbian high school student, and make choices that ultimately lead to either loneliness or love.

Note: There are some mistakes I will be fixing soon so I apologize in advance. Please enjoy.
12 Aug 2021
This was really great, romantic, cute, & especially sexy. I loved it. But it needs to be longer, and more romantic, more story, more sexiness, more sexual activity, more conversation, more sex. I liked it but it could have used more twists. Like the Matt busting in on them making out with his cam..and it rolls from there like do they choose to pursue the relationship? Can you make more like this?

12 Aug 2021
This was really great, romantic, cute, & especially sexy. I loved it. But it needs to be longer, and more romantic, more story, more sexiness, more sexual activity, more conversation, more sex.

Review Lonzetta14
17 Jan 2019
Im in love

Comment mahboi
26 May 2018
gayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Review scarletlily
19 Feb 2018
this made me really happy, thank you.

Review MW Creatives
12 Apr 2017
Very good and exciting. Just way too short... make it three times longer = 5 stars.

Comment jamiewing
10 Jun 2016
50 shades of grey beats this shit

Review jamiewing
10 Jun 2016
Trash, not even slightly aroused

10 Jun 2016
Not sexy enough

Comment zombiedude5151
10 Jun 2016
What dickead wrote this, not erotic enough

Comment laurencesutton
10 Jun 2016
luved it had a wank to it

10 Jun 2016
bullshit absolute wank

Comment laurencesutton
10 Jun 2016
bollocks fuckin pile of shit

Comment grimwolf_theman
05 Jun 2016
awesome but can you make it longer

04 Jun 2016
can you make more like this

Review DawnFlare
12 Feb 2016
brilliant, I SOO wish it was longer

Comment DawnFlare
12 Feb 2016
I loved it, I wish it was longer.

Review Ember
07 Feb 2016
It was short and sweet but highly predictable. I liked it but it could have used more twists. Like the Matt busting in on them making out with his cam..and it rolls from there like do they choose to pursue the relationship? Or decide Lucy can't hack the attention and she begs her parents to move? Idk just as one writer to another

Comment Aa214
01 Dec 2015

Just some friendly feedback: it may have been my particular path, but the pacing felt a little wonky--it left me thinking, "Yeah, we all WISH romance went this perfectly," instead of feeling invested in the relationship.


01 Dec 2015
Oh fuck off you ignorant turd @iantheterminator

26 Oct 2015
At the party I nearly jumped out of my skin when Rachel grabbed me! Holy shit <3 I loved it

Comment Kiir
10 Oct 2015
@IantheTerminator

You... DO know that it's very wrong to insult and condemn love when love happens, right?

09 Oct 2015
You.. DO know it's very wrong to be gay, right?

Comment smol
06 Oct 2015
very gay. a+

Review BeggerStager
04 Oct 2015
... Interesting

Pretty descriptive...

... Nice

02 Oct 2015
You did a stellar job. :)

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