Draygun and the Presence: Chapter One by Philipsmith

My first twine game.

You wake up after a strange nightmare quickly brushing it off and continuing your village life.

You have more important things to do, namely getting ready for the journey to the capital city with your two best friends.

Has RPG elements like race choice, skills and attributes being used in choices and influencing consequences.

Some of which will span through the next chapters.

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Review by RollingGoat

05 Feb 2023

Seriously great job. I was pretty disappointing by the "RPG" section of this site, but you nailed it.

(5)

Review by Rogrim

18 Sep 2017

Reminds me of my first dnd rouge
Good story

(5)

Review by Madcap

26 May 2017

Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter.

(5)

Review by Icamenal

02 Apr 2016

I feel like the grammatical errors (like the lack of commas) detract from the story, and in my opinion, the plotline is just alright. Gameplay wise, I like the professional feel that I haven't seen in some of the other games on this site. The characterization is also good. Hoping for the next chapter, looking forward to see what happens with the skills and attributes.

(3)

Review by myusername

28 Jan 2016

Will be waiting for the next chapter

(4)

Review by william oost

16 Jan 2016

One word
AMAZING its like a normal role playing game but cooler

(5)

Review by schertec

13 Nov 2015

Awesome. Please finish this. I would like to see more dialogue options. Like when Draygun and others are talking I'd like to have that reflect how the story goes or how characters perceive me. But seriously cool.