ClaytonKO

Review for Burst Forth!

That's actually pretty neat. you should consider making this an rpg or simulator as a text adventure instead of a gamebook.

Review for Kingdom

It really could use some work but awesome idea

Review for The Abyss

I liked this a lot. It was interesting enough to keep me reading and I don't read much. I have to get hooked very well before I'll read anything. There were some typos that threw me off a couple of times and there were parts that just did not make since to me, still really good.