youth44

Reviews by youth44

Review for After Curfew
05 Feb 2017
A few grammatical mistakes, but otherwise it appeared good. I would only advise better word choice and more creative choices.
(3)

05 Feb 2017
This story is quite the charmer. The plot is splendid and the characters are entertaining. Although, your writing does seem to have a few spelling errors all through out. There were also sentences that didn't seem to correctly convey your thoughts. Alas, they confused me. I would suggest that you go back with a critical eye and edit this. On the other hand, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Good job!
(4)

04 Jun 2015
It was really fun.
(4)

04 Jun 2015
I loved it. And you're right. I am a poop.
(3)

Review for The Walk v1.0
12 Feb 2014
I love it! :D
(5)


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