I liked a lot! I can't wait for A Darkened Fate to come out, and in the time when I am writing this, Easter is coming quite soon now, so I WANT IT!!! Anyway, the only thing I can say about the game (constructive critisism) is that you use some words a lot of times on the same page, but that's it.
This was GREAT it was fantasticly funny, but I agree with fellow reviewer DaNiX88, it could have been a little longer, but I loved it anyway. I WANT MOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!.
I really liked and I'm looking forward to the second instalment. Just a little fix you could do was if when you died you restarted from the previous page and not all the way from the beggining. That's the only thing I have to say, thank you.