LatiasPrismZtar
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Reviews by LatiasPrismZtar
09 Jun 2026
Great so far! It's sad that it's dead but I really liked it so far and am trying to finish it.
You can find it here:
https://www.inklewriter.com/stories/277624
So far I've only changed a little, such as creating better page links, fixing the grammar (you can be quite the hypocrite in your comments about grammar), removing some meta elements, and changing some of the cats' names (e.g. I changed Fallskye's name to Fallensky and Blacknight's name to Blackmoon to make them valid warrior names). I also split the book into chapters. Chapter 1 takes place in the Void. Chapter 2 is variable depending on previous choices:
Chapter 2A if you accept Fallenspirit's mission to save DayClan.
Chapter 2B if you reject Fallenspirit's mission and become a loner/kittypet.
Chapter 2C if you successfully kill Fallenspirit and go on to save NightClan.
Chapter 2D if you flee from Fallenspirit and go on to save both DayClan and NightClan.
You can find it here:
https://www.inklewriter.com/stories/277624
So far I've only changed a little, such as creating better page links, fixing the grammar (you can be quite the hypocrite in your comments about grammar), removing some meta elements, and changing some of the cats' names (e.g. I changed Fallskye's name to Fallensky and Blacknight's name to Blackmoon to make them valid warrior names). I also split the book into chapters. Chapter 1 takes place in the Void. Chapter 2 is variable depending on previous choices:
Chapter 2A if you accept Fallenspirit's mission to save DayClan.
Chapter 2B if you reject Fallenspirit's mission and become a loner/kittypet.
Chapter 2C if you successfully kill Fallenspirit and go on to save NightClan.
Chapter 2D if you flee from Fallenspirit and go on to save both DayClan and NightClan.