I liked it. The choices I made did not reveal any major spelling mistakes, or at least, none that I noticed, so that is all good. The story seemed a little underdeveloped and it was fairly short. The length isn't too much of an issue, but the story part is, seeing as it is a game about stories, essentially. So if that was improved the rating would go up. Honestly it just needs a bit of context, something to make me fall into the story and feel the danger, rather than just reading it.
