i think the story is pretty good , although the paragraphs could describe more emotion or scenery for example when you follow petal bloom it would have been fun if MC had though various different things before discovering she's on a forbidden relationship i also think you should add more options ,it doesn't even have to affect the plot too much like walking to confront petal bloom and snapping a branch isnt of obligating the player to go to sleep. basically make a possibility and take the possibility away creatively instead of obligating the player to not do that possibility (i hope i explained good enough am very bad at explaining stuff )
