A good game, a part two would be GREAT. There were just a couple grammar mistakes and that's why the rating isn't higher; the dialogue was also a little sparse between Dan and the Survivor.
VERY good story and one of the few non-typing games I've enjoyed. The only reason this isn't a five is because there were a couple times when the writing didn't flow smoothly. It was also very short but that's fine; this could definitely go somewhere.