mickobrats
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Reviews by mickobrats
Review for Zork
13 Apr 2015
Found difficult but loved the smart ass comments when you put in stupid commands, was lots of fun and a great laugh... yet to complete however haha
Review for Fatal Island Part 2
13 Apr 2015
I loved every second on your game and loved the different paths and how each either ended or continued.
Some Notes/Feedback:
- Regaining your footing - spelling of 'week' should be 'weak'
- Grab a hold of it - you never stated that the character died
- Ma'am, we HAVE to go! - third paragraph/lot of text. '... thrashes about as she's pulled under what.' This doesn't make any sense. Was she pull under the water or something else?
- "I guess we could build a raft while we wait." - Wait until daybreak (broken link) is a broken link to be fixed
- Get to shore! - didn't have the greatest of endings... maybe circle it around again to the savage finding you on the beach or you stave to death, something a bit more than You were captured! Then there are question like, who captured you, was it the savage, if so, what happened next? or did something else get to you...?
- i loved the checkpoints, they become very useful
- the idea of the game and story layout was great and every enjoyable!
overall loved your game and loved trying to survive as many times as possible. Hope the feedback helps make your even better than it already is. Keep up the amazing work!
Some Notes/Feedback:
- Regaining your footing - spelling of 'week' should be 'weak'
- Grab a hold of it - you never stated that the character died
- Ma'am, we HAVE to go! - third paragraph/lot of text. '... thrashes about as she's pulled under what.' This doesn't make any sense. Was she pull under the water or something else?
- "I guess we could build a raft while we wait." - Wait until daybreak (broken link) is a broken link to be fixed
- Get to shore! - didn't have the greatest of endings... maybe circle it around again to the savage finding you on the beach or you stave to death, something a bit more than You were captured! Then there are question like, who captured you, was it the savage, if so, what happened next? or did something else get to you...?
- i loved the checkpoints, they become very useful
- the idea of the game and story layout was great and every enjoyable!
overall loved your game and loved trying to survive as many times as possible. Hope the feedback helps make your even better than it already is. Keep up the amazing work!