unreaper

Review for Giant Adventure - The Secret of Sizon

i like it so far.
i'm a big fan of the lines about how the feet look and how much they smell.
i love vore and smelly barefeet.

now for what i think needs to be added and fixed about the game itself:
1. i think for the "rolls" i think they need to be higher than they are now.
(by rolls i mean those point in the story where you get a random number to see if you passed or failed to reach the number required.) it doesn't have to be much. just make it so when you "roll" you roll higher than you do now. i don't know how much to increase the number. so for now i'll just say 3. so for example if a have 4 dex and i "roll" a 22. if the range of numbers go up by 3. then that 22 i "rolled" for will instead be a 25.
hopefully you understand what i mean.
2. while i like the part about feet.
i don't like foot crush or being stomped on.
now i'm not asking you to remove or change that. it's your story so if you want it then you can keep it. i'm just asking you to tone it down a little.
what i would to see is part of the story where you are at the feet of a kind girl.
a girl that won't try to harm you in anyway with her feet. but while she is kind enough to try not to harm you. doesn't mean see wants you away from her feet.
basically i want girls with sweaty smelly barefeet wanting you at there feet but not wanting to physically harm you in any way.
3. i like more vore options as well as the story continuing after you been shallowed.
now i know getting eaten means game over and that makes since.
but i just want i little more story after you get eaten.
talk about digestion and or the struggling in the belly.
with stuff like that. i think the vore scenes would be way better.