The story-line in this is great! There may be some grammatical errors, but overall I don't think it's that noticeable. This is based on the main four clan and isn't exactly correct, but I think it won't matter. As long as the story-line is good and the writing is great! This is also your first time, so I don't blame you. Keep it up! Excited for the full release.
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