Fredicus

Review for The Thing About Dungeons

Good concept and interesting writing style.

Review for Deeper

Pretty good. I would add some more functions/descriptions for searching things you list such as wells, statues, caravans ;). A good adventurer looks at these things and wants to explore. Also, the multi-monster menu is a pain, and eg "kill go 3" would be nice short hand to have instead of having to specify for each attack and search.