Well, this was ok, but it seriously lacked some major aspects. I actually liked the general storyline, but there were a few things that need fixing. Sam-I know good grammar isn't exactly necessary, but it sets a more friendly and easy-play tone for the player. For example: There is Link here. Not so great. Also, I am stuck in the small hut. And what the heck is the dying ember for? The leather cloak? Ever thought of making the hut in the village acsessable? (I know I spelled that wrong...) Whatever. This needs a bunch of improvement.
Well, this was ok, but it seriously lacked some major aspects. I actually liked the general storyline, but there were a few things that need fixing. Sam-I know good grammar isn't exactly necessary, but it sets a more friendly and easy-play tone for the player. For example: There is Link here. Not so great. Also, I am stuck in the small hut. And what the heck is the dying ember for? The leather cloak? Ever thought of making the hut in the village acsessable? (I know I spelled that wrong...) Whatever. This needs a bunch of improvement.
