It's not bad, but it's really short. How much are you updating it? I see a lot of potential, and you have some awesome ideas. Keep going!
Pretty good! I know it's not finished, but don't rush. Whenever I do something I don't really want to do, I do a little bit every day. Even 1 page can make a big difference! If you want to make it a little less complicated, I recommend deleting some of the name options. While it is fun, it makes it much more simple to just get rid of some of them, and they're not essential anyway. As long as you have a male and a female, you're fine. Anway, that's all I had to say. Keep writing, I see a lot of potential here!
Not bad but it definitely needs to be worked on. Also once you finish playing mossball with Fawnkit and being on defense (and after you win!) It goes to where you wake up with one of the other kits and explore the forest. Could you fix that? Thanks!
Sorry, but I didn't think it was that fun. I thought the symbols were overly confusing, it's definitely not finished, and I'm not sure I got it that much. If you could simplify it, that would be great.