UTOPIA (Everything you want is here) by dangsoo

You are young and ambitious.
You find your current life empty of opportunity.
You have decided you need a huge change.
You have your possessions with you, and you have purchased a flat in the city.
You pick up your bags.
You get on the train.

This is a short game designed to invert the typical view of a perfect futuristic utopia.

Made for my final project in my first year of Illustration degree :)
Warning: Mentions of drug use and domestic abuse.

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Comment XanMag

27 Apr 2015

A few typos so FYI... receive, a lot, and outfit... Also, some of the white text blended in with the white areas of the pics making it a bit tough to read. =)

Anyway, not bad, but I felt I didn't really have a say in the matter. There were a few branches in there, but after a few selections, everything felt too linear. For example, I didn't have an option to kick the guy in the nuts or give him a three-stooges-poke-in-the-eye when he (I assume he) tried to force me to stay? Bleck.

All-in-all, not bad. I liked the pictures you put in there to add some spice (although I'm not sure why a naked girl is in the city and not being arrested or gawked at by bystanders :). The writing was above average and wasn't distracting. I'd like to see more choices rather than it being linear though. Keep writing and Happy Gaming!

Review Nick_Crafter

27 Apr 2015

Not a bad game, few branches though and it could encourage people to take drugs...
Also, I see a bit of domestic abuse in there as well...

Anyways, It was a good story nonetheless, I don't feel that the name exactly fits it, though thats not my place.