The apocalypse: Episode 1 by MTaylor

Review Azure27

One of the games that I've actually like

Review Tomtomtom145

Not bad but it can be better

Comment Tomtomtom145

Not bad but dont understand a lot of it

Review AM13

Hard to understand some things due to grammar and spelling errors, however good storyline. Could have added more choices that the reader could interact with in the story.

Review GameofChocolate

This game could be more fun if:
1. It had better grammar and spelling.
2. It had a wider range of choices effecting outcome.
3. I could have a choice to not do stupid things like talk out loud when I'm trying to be stealthy. That situation with the soldier could so have been avoided if the person I was playing had just kept his thoughts inward.

Also the chick drops her gun. Really? Someone who's been part of the hunting squad for a long time would not have casually dropped her gun.

Review SusieT

Great storyline although I keep dying keep them coming!!

Comment MTaylor

To understand the timeline there is SOA Lore game book being made to get an understanding since the game uses a lot of lore.

Comment MikeMan

Display looked good and good thinking on putting the explicit on, the war stories and the stories of the apocalypse will never be clean will it?

Review MikeMan

A good adventure set in the old war stories universe recaptured the dark and broken Earth feeling but in text. There were few errors some English errors and sometimes the atmosphere seems forced but nothing is without a few errors. This feels like a worthy reboot to the old game its not perfect nor near the sense in anyway but its on its way if you give it some updates.

Good job on recapturing the old game and putting it in text, quite hard feat.

Review ChazCliffhanger

Bad English and the story was erratic.

Comment MTaylor

Khep thanks for letting me know, changed it see if this is better if not just leave another comment.

Comment Khep

Nice cover art. A post-apocalypse story setting might be interesting. But . . . the fairly dark, red-ish background makes the text (which is pretty small) quite hard to read -- hard enough that I won't even try expanding the page and reading through the first page of text.