Wow, that was good! Really enjoyed it! Simply written, but extremely effective! The only thing stopping me from giving it a perfect score, though, is that there were a few spelling errors and little in the way of punctuation. But, honestly, that's just me being nit-picky! Sequel? Here's hoping! :D
It seems to flow together really well, good storyline, nice ties to the endings that you usually can't see coming. I don't usually like games arranged like this, but there weren't as many sentences as one of those extremely visual ones, which are pretty wordy, although good descriptions are still given. I think you spelled limousine wrong. Some cuss words are imminent, so just be aware of that. All around great game.
very nice descriptions where clearly acceptive and it gradually fitted together in one piece makes me think of the rockstar gta games as if im in the real world very nice game concept keep up the goodwork!