Warrior Cats - Life in NightClan {PART 1} by _NightFrost_

Note: PART 1 IS FINISHED! WORKING ON PART 2
Hello! Welcome to 'Life in NightClan, {PART 1}'.
Here is your first day as an apprentice, exploring the territories.
Another note: This Life in NightClan game will be in parts. This is part 1, your first day as an apprentice.
Please comment for bugs or glitches!

Part 2: Working on it!

And if you want your cat to be inserted in this game. Please write down in the comments.
/Name/Age in moons/Rank/Clan or loners, it's fine/Looks(Fur color, eye color, etc.)/And Personality/
The clans are - NightClan, CloudClan, RainClan, and LeafClan.

Thank you for playing!
20 Jan 2025
It's great! I can't wait till part 2!!!

Comment Honeybee♡
05 Sep 2023
RoseHeart-- 28--NightClan--Queen--Light pink fur with a white heart on her chest, stripes on her neck, white paws, a white tail tip, and white ear tips. She has amber eyes. She is kind and is a mother figure to many. She has three kits, DawnKit,Moonkit, and Sunkit. Sunkit[tom] Moonkit[shecat] dawnkit[Shecat]. Sunkit and dawnkit left as warriors to be rouges. Moonkit didn't remember them when they came back and tried to attack them.. moonkit died and left to starclan! RoseHeart died because of her mate CrowClaw.

Review Foxglove
29 Jun 2022
I really enjoyed your little story! It's very similar to a story that I'm working on. Some of our names are even the same. I also have a cat that I want to be inserted into your game. Her name is Willow, and she is a loner who has yellow eyes and grey-and-white splotched fur. She is patient and kind. Thank you!
---Respectfully, Foxglove

Comment Roeseii
29 Nov 2021
A pretty great story so far!
I have found a small grammar mistake where there's an " where it shouldn't but that's all so far. Writing could be a little better with more details but thats pretty much just a personal thought.
For one I think it should be explained that if you click multiple times things will change (EX: Fur color changing between Black, Grey, and White) And the apprentice ceremony could of been shortened if you did it all together (EX: "Briarkit, Bluekit, and Reedkit, it is time that you be apprenticed. From this moment on you will be called Briarpaw, Bluepaw, and Reedpaw. Briarpaw, your mentor will be Jaycloud ((and yk. continue like that))
Silverpaw is referred to as "Silverkit" at the end of Page 3. And other than that things are fine! I did feel the story was rushed at parts, so adding more details would really help, but in all it has potential, can't wait to see part 2! <3

Comment Beekachu
22 Nov 2021
This game is well detailed and is far from simple or basic, cant wait for part 2 :)

14 Nov 2021
I have been looking up "Warrior Cats: Part 1"!!!!!! and then it said, "Runtime Error"!!!!

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