The last alliance by ejm29

Review SnowWhite

It's pretty good. :) worth playing again and again.

Comment ejm29

Thank you all for your comments and suggestions, ill be sure to keep them in mind when making my next game. :)

Review mick green

Enjoyed - you made an ambitious topic simple and easy to grasp. Your writing style hooks the reader nicely. Makes me want to do a Tolkien text adventure.

Review Odie_da_Bossé

I actually totally disagree with Father; this is a good length for a quick game.

But maybe a bit less writing could of made this better; even though the writing here was very well paced, the length of your passages could be a little smaller, just so you can go on with the game quicker.

Another thing you could think about including in the future is pictures. Adds some better visual of the story. Otherwise, this would be one of my favourites. Well one, ejm29.

Comment ejm29

Thank you for the rating :)
I would have also liked it to be much longer, but as it is based on a battle form a book I could not. Though I plan to make a longer one soon :)

Review Father Thyme

Stirring stuff well imagined, but could be longer.