The Rite of Rulers by Rubidius

The Rite of Rulers, a ritual rife with adventure and heroism, has come again to the land. Follow the story of this young man as he comes to discover more about this ancient Rite and the secrets therein. Not to mention the secrets he must uncover about himself.

V 0.1.5

Update: This is half of the first chapter. Unfortunately, I haven't been able to give this project the time it deserves, so here's a little something for now. This includes the first plot-changing choice you have to make (though the ramifications aren't too extreme yet).

This is my first shot at an RPG gamebook (or a gamebook of any genre, for that matter). I hope this little tidbit is enough to get you interested in my story. I know many people put up stuff for early feedback, and so likewise, that's what I'm looking for here.

Enjoy!

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Review Dustylizard

01 May 2016

I love it but it is only like 2 percent done

Comment Aparad

22 Jul 2015

It started really good. Would like to play more! :)

Review myusername

18 Jun 2015

Needs to be finished, but that's the only reason it's a 3

Comment myusername

18 Jun 2015

Seems like it will be a good story. Hope you finish it soon!

Comment Rubidius

28 Mar 2015

Yeah, Chapter 1 is still on the way. I've been busy with some other stuff, and been having a little trouble deciding just what direction I want to go as far as creation. I should have V 0.2 up soon.

Comment Father Thyme

25 Mar 2015

I will definitely look for updates on this. Great start.

Comment DaNiX88

24 Mar 2015

So far, it's beautifully written, all you need to do is keep going!
:D

Comment toby62

24 Mar 2015

Looks good so far, you should keep working on it!:)

Comment GFLemon

24 Mar 2015

i loved it please continue it! :D

Comment Seedot929

23 Mar 2015

Looks interesting. Can't really tell where it's going because you only have a prologue done so far, though.
I look forward to more, but I can't really give you much advice because of lack of content so far. Sorry :P