The first part of a simple text adventure narrative which I created for a uni project. Thought I would upload it for anyone who wants to give it a go :)
The basic idea of the story is that a child of the gods is struggling to come to terms with the idea of free will. Ergo an adventure/pilgrimage is needed. You play as this child on their adventure.
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Very nice but you should try adding choices that the player would have to second guess which choice is more appropriate for the current situation other than that Great job!