I don't like how the first part is you HAVE to be a officer, when there is two suggestions and its in your description. I had to take a star off that, secondly could you add a little more sentences cus it gets short and boring. It's kind of pointless to click something over and over again after you've failed..
I think the writing wasn't all that great and there were too many times you had to click something pointlessly. That gets annoying! But it's an interesting idea with some fairly clever puzzles