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That was way too short and overly simplistic!
I think the writing wasn't all that great and there were too many times you had to click something pointlessly. That gets annoying! But it's an interesting idea with some fairly clever puzzles
Was this written by an elementary school kid? This is written so poorly
Very meaningful story. Only problem is that it's barely interactive at all so maybe it should've just been made as a regular story
LOL, really funny but it has lots of grammatical, spelling, etc errors. It also freezes all the time so I could never finish it
All the branches ended so quickly. Kinda disappointing :-(
Very well-written & worth the time to read. Just wish there weren't so many deaths!
Well-written & I like how you have a button that lets you go back one page/choice
Very interesting and unique. There are some typos but overall it's written well. Is there a "true" ending to this or do they all loop back to the beginning?
It's definitely better than average and well-written but the ending was too abrupt. There was also a problem with text not showing up at one point, the font you use for the choices is too dark to read against a black background, and there were very few meaningful choices here other than the obviously wrong ones.
Well-written and interesting but short
Pretty damn funny but all the options basically led to the same thing so not that great as a CYOA. Plus, really short
This is one of the best CYOAs I've read on this site. I liked seeing how all the branches played out--very intriguing
I really liked this CYOA based on Jurassic Park altho I thought some of the choices were too obvious as to which was the right one
This is unfortunately not well-written and too short and simplistic to be something I could recommend
I was expecting this to be like The Descent but found that it's more like the interaction between Batman and the Joker. I was a little disappointed by that but I can still appreciate that it's a well-written story
Well written and funny. I really enjoyed this. It was 20 minutes well spent! I also appreciate how you added the checkpoint system which really cuts down on the frustration of getting back to where you were after reaching a dead end.