lemnlime

This user has not published any games publicly yet.

Reviews by lemnlime

Review for Survive the 1920s
11 May 2023
Well-written and interesting. Thanks for uploading!
(5)

26 Apr 2023
Not much in the way of choices and it really needs a "lower your volume" warning but it was pretty good. The ending was unexpected
(4)

12 Oct 2022
Well done! A well-written and entertaining CYOA
(5)

10 Jun 2022
One of the best stories I've seen on the site. Well written & well done!
(5)

Review for Time Quest
06 Feb 2020
That was way too short and overly simplistic!
(3)

Review for Criminal Catcher
06 Feb 2020
I think the writing wasn't all that great and there were too many times you had to click something pointlessly. That gets annoying! But it's an interesting idea with some fairly clever puzzles
(3)

Review for Atlantis
06 Feb 2020
Was this written by an elementary school kid? This is written so poorly
(2)

Review for The Cosmonaut
11 Oct 2019
Very meaningful story. Only problem is that it's barely interactive at all so maybe it should've just been made as a regular story
(4)

Review for Threehole Hospital
26 Aug 2019
LOL, really funny but it has lots of grammatical, spelling, etc errors. It also freezes all the time so I could never finish it
(4)

Review for Galaxy Defender
26 Aug 2019
All the branches ended so quickly. Kinda disappointing :-(
(3)

Review for U Novu Mondu
11 Jul 2019
Very well-written & worth the time to read. Just wish there weren't so many deaths!
(5)

Review for Man Vs Monster
21 Jun 2019
Well-written & I like how you have a button that lets you go back one page/choice
(5)

Review for Sanrekhit
07 May 2019
Very interesting and unique. There are some typos but overall it's written well. Is there a "true" ending to this or do they all loop back to the beginning?
(5)

Review for MoonBaseX
23 Apr 2019
It's definitely better than average and well-written but the ending was too abrupt. There was also a problem with text not showing up at one point, the font you use for the choices is too dark to read against a black background, and there were very few meaningful choices here other than the obviously wrong ones.
(4)

05 Feb 2019
Well-written and interesting but short
(5)

21 Jan 2019
Short but well-written!
(5)

04 May 2018
Pretty damn funny but all the options basically led to the same thing so not that great as a CYOA. Plus, really short
(4)

This is one of the best CYOAs I've read on this site. I liked seeing how all the branches played out--very intriguing
(5)

Review for Mi viejo escritorio
21 Mar 2018
Interesante...muy curioso
(5)

21 Mar 2018
I really liked this CYOA based on Jurassic Park altho I thought some of the choices were too obvious as to which was the right one
(5)

Review for The Lion King
17 Feb 2018
This is unfortunately not well-written and too short and simplistic to be something I could recommend
(2)

17 Feb 2018
I was expecting this to be like The Descent but found that it's more like the interaction between Batman and the Joker. I was a little disappointed by that but I can still appreciate that it's a well-written story
(4)

28 Jan 2018
Well written and funny. I really enjoyed this. It was 20 minutes well spent! I also appreciate how you added the checkpoint system which really cuts down on the frustration of getting back to where you were after reaching a dead end.
(5)


Support

Forums