Besides a few grammatical errors, this game is really good! I enjoyed how it took its time falling into place. This game has the perfect pacing of confusion and connections to lace the whole thing together and tie the knot at the very end. Great job!
I had fun with this. Even if the options actually seem to be an illusion of choice rather than anything that affects the outcome of the game, it's nice that they're anyway, to provide some level of interactivity. This 10 minute Choose-Your-Own-Adventure style game comes from a dark, introverted, and scary/surreal place. If that sounds like your kind of game, give it a quick play or two.