Legacy Player: The "Play online" link above uses the new Quest Viva WebPlayer, which is currently in Beta. In case of issues,
you can try the old WebPlayer.
I think this story has the potential to be Fantastic If you worked on it a little more. I am always up for helping you and good luck. When you give out a really good story you will feel really good aout yoursef :) Also I said this in the comments but I loved how you used my warrior cat RP name fernstar when I do roblox