warriors lost kit part 2 by waterfall wild

Comment waterfall wild

ok i am making more to this im sorry i havent yet

Review FernStone

I think this story has the potential to be Fantastic If you worked on it a little more. I am always up for helping you and good luck. When you give out a really good story you will feel really good aout yoursef :) Also I said this in the comments but I loved how you used my warrior cat RP name fernstar when I do roblox

Comment FernStone

Do you play roblox and if you do then did you play the warrior cats RP because I kind of liked how you used my Warrior cats RP name FernStar when I was leader of thunderclan. IDK just thought it was a funny personal twist for me :)

Comment FernStone

The last thing I wanted to say is I personally would choose to be a medicine cat but I like warriors a lot to. So my vote would go to med cat but if you want to be leader then I would say go for it and be a warrior!

Comment FernStone

Another thing I wanted to tell you is that I could give you ideas if you need help because we are both kind of new to this. For example I just realeased my first game and an Idea that you are free to use is if you choose the keep playing option maybe a fox attacks or something like that because you made it sound like something bad is going to happen.

Comment FernStone

Hi I am a new cat here who would like you to read my story and tell me how you think of it and the link is right here!

http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/maojjgjufkylkipmpwxhfg/warrior-cats-thunderclan

I hope that You will comment your opinion and enjoy. Also I liked your entire story and think It was great. Could You give me some tips on how to make it better anyone?

Comment Warriorcat_●▪

Hello! Just came to say part 2 for stray dog life is here.