I'm sorry, but I didn't find it that fun to be honest. But don't be too sad! I'm sure that one day you'll make a text adventure that will blow minds away! Good luck!
pretty good! i just think it needs more description. like i didn't even know the lava was there until it said the creepers fell in it. good start though!
Not exactly the right grammar. Also, it was only the illusion of choice and some of the choices just killed you immediately. WTF. Too short aswell. A good game is made in a month or two. Not a day.