Somewhat short, but a very interesting world idea. I kept winding up in the hospital. You should really make it longer. Great game though, and thanks for the review on my game. Even now, you earned your 4.
This was rather nice game, with great spelling and grammar (Excuse mine, I have a bad keyboard) , and somewhat terrified me. Now, I do have some complaints. It basically gave the illusion of choice, with only one real ending. It could've been longer. Now, do not mistake my observations for dissapointment, as I was pretty pleased by the gamebook. I would've rated a five except for the above reasons. Uh, bye.
Not exactly the right grammar. Also, it was only the illusion of choice and some of the choices just killed you immediately. WTF. Too short aswell. A good game is made in a month or two. Not a day.
