Sticks by idostuff

Review by Something Moving Under The Bed

This deserves a better description than 'a project for school' -most aren't this good!
Great writing, really evocative, and paced well. It's a really original idea too, which few Lovecraftian-inspired stories are!
An interesting idea including a few 'directors commentary' type links along with the story (although it could tempt people to look and spoil the flow a bit the first time through). Good use of sound too, though they cut off a bit suddenly. Would benefit from a bit of proof-reading!
A really good tale that leaves you wanting more, and very polished. Look forward to more of your work, hopefully, in future!

Review by Ozzy S.T.

Congratulations idostuff, this really is a great story you've come up with. The plot is interesting right from the start, and it had me wanting to continue till the very end to find out what the outcome of it all was going to be. I liked all the characters and the way you were able to introduce them in such a short but effective way.

I highly recommend this interactive story to all horror and mistery fans out there. You will not regret choosing this one. And, as an educational bonus, you'll learn quite a lot about elements that are crucial to horror literature and found in so many (if not all) of your favourite scary movies.