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This is a fan made game about ideas for a Telltale Games production of AMC's Breaking Bad. You play as Tyler "Ty" Johnson, a man forced to crime, to earn money for his teenage daughter to have a good life, after his wife Rosie, died.
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I won't say I loved it, but I definitley did enjoy it. The characters were mostly interesting, sometimes a little too 'badass'.
The story...I didn't like it that much yet, but don't get me wrong, it was not bad, either. It's just that it seems there are a little too many coincidences.
Why did the cops not search for Shawn and Ty (in my playthrough)?
How did Pop remove a bullet from someone's head just like that in 3 minutes?
Why is there almost no good shot on the enemy's side?
Now, there are quiet a lot grammatical errors, while they aren't that bad, they take away a bit from the feeling.
You should also add more meaningful choices, only one choice was really hard for me.
It was ok. I would love for you to use actual paragraphs instead of making one paragraph for each section. Also, the choices weren't very meaningful. Plus, just a tip, don't do a "If you did this click here" thing, it takes you out of the experience. Besides the cliffhanger, I don't really see the point of it being in the Breaking Bad universe (as much as I love the show, I don't really see any point in making my own story in said universe). Speaking of story, I didn't find it all that interesting. It was kind of random and dragged on at times (though I thought the length was good, the time itself could have been better used) Better luck with Episode 2!