Breaking Bad Episode 1: On the Run by -XYAB-

Review by The Crock

This game sucks very badly! The grammar is awful! The author needs to learn English and how to write a book before attempting another one.

Review by Sreer

SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW

I think the first Episode was...promising.

I won't say I loved it, but I definitley did enjoy it. The characters were mostly interesting, sometimes a little too 'badass'.

The story...I didn't like it that much yet, but don't get me wrong, it was not bad, either. It's just that it seems there are a little too many coincidences.

Why did the cops not search for Shawn and Ty (in my playthrough)?
How did Pop remove a bullet from someone's head just like that in 3 minutes?
Why is there almost no good shot on the enemy's side?

Now, there are quiet a lot grammatical errors, while they aren't that bad, they take away a bit from the feeling.

You should also add more meaningful choices, only one choice was really hard for me.

Review by SivD1

It was ok. I would love for you to use actual paragraphs instead of making one paragraph for each section. Also, the choices weren't very meaningful. Plus, just a tip, don't do a "If you did this click here" thing, it takes you out of the experience. Besides the cliffhanger, I don't really see the point of it being in the Breaking Bad universe (as much as I love the show, I don't really see any point in making my own story in said universe). Speaking of story, I didn't find it all that interesting. It was kind of random and dragged on at times (though I thought the length was good, the time itself could have been better used) Better luck with Episode 2!