This is a really good game! I'm looking forward to any new updates, and I'm already drawn in by the story.
Really good job, keep on doing what you're doing.
It started out on a very interesting base. You could have done so much more with this story.
Instead, you have so few choices (actually, you only click on one, because you immediatley can tell what the other one results in). Don't forget you're supposed to make a GAME here, not a linear story.
But I must admit I got a creepy vibe in the end, that you have managed to achieve.
I would encourage you to put more effort into the story, work on this plot point or that, and it'd be a solid horror story.
But like this? Not there yet.
I won't say I loved it, but I definitley did enjoy it. The characters were mostly interesting, sometimes a little too 'badass'.
The story...I didn't like it that much yet, but don't get me wrong, it was not bad, either. It's just that it seems there are a little too many coincidences.
Why did the cops not search for Shawn and Ty (in my playthrough)?
How did Pop remove a bullet from someone's head just like that in 3 minutes?
Why is there almost no good shot on the enemy's side?
Now, there are quiet a lot grammatical errors, while they aren't that bad, they take away a bit from the feeling.
You should also add more meaningful choices, only one choice was really hard for me.
