Shrunk at the Pool by Scarcity

Review allahbomb69

People saying its a copy of the club game, no not really. The author clearly learned a lot from the club game but its a pool not a club so calm down ur not the main character

Aside from the game is alright, the death counter system is a good touch to see what content you missed (i cant find death 18 lmao) but the game is poorly made aside from the writing. The default “look at” and “take” button descriptions are still there for many of the things but i mean its sort of lacking creativity

One more thing, for the people complaining about the “racism” no its not racism its immersion. Being stuck in a white girls sock would be drastically different than a filipino worker’s shoe. Its immersion not racism

That being said 3 stars for the creativity but due to the laziness of the game i cant go any higher

Review pxycho

always been mixed with this one.
one, the character name choices are very damn-near racist if not just purely being so. i mean come on, "black", "latina", it's very offensive.
apparently the game also has elements just torn from shrunken at the club which i wasn't even aware of, and that is not very cool.
other than that, the actual original content is actually pretty good, and this game would've had potential if it didn't have so many cons.

Review Weevers666

Please update it

Comment Darkshot

I am glad that the game got updated, but I want to know what was added in the last two updates, I am having trouble finding it.

Comment Txtadventurer

Wow, you're back??

Review Txtadventurer

Come back

Review Gibby7777777

Wish this game was still being updated.

Comment Txtadventurer

Sincerely doubt it'll be updated

Comment Gar2547

Please add more

Review Tiny man 71196

I could say.. That is my most favorite game right now in GTS/Shrunk

Review Christin

it be 2021 we still wating

Review aceshley1989

this game is really awesome. for the next update please let there be rebirth in the girl's locker room.

Comment HighImpactMoth

is this game abandoned? I hope not

Review proveyed

Beneath the several technical issues that show a general lack of polish on your game, it also unabashedly copies mine!

Technical problems:
- When creating a new object, click on the "object" tab. At the bottom you'll see "display verbs," click the "take" option and delete it if the object cannot be taken.
- Always add a description if you add an item, if it says "Nothing out of the ordinary." when examined then you forgot to add a description.
- If you create an object, make sure to change the prefix to match. If you have an unnamed woman, like a latina, on the "setup" tab find the "type" option and select "female character." For the most part those options will automatically assign proper prefixes and you won't get stuff like "you see a black" anymore.
- After going east from the spawn point, you have to go... east again? to get back. Change the exit to west.
- At the snack bar counter, both down and south will let you exit the table. You only need one exit.
- There are a variety of entirely pointless objects with no examine or options to interact, like the working woman's waist. Why? Don't include them.

Writing issues:
- Very blatantly racist character names in the "black" and "latina" character. What? At first I thought this was a simple fix but racial descriptions are deeply engrained in almost every description throughout the game, even whenever you're dying in the working lady's sock the game feels it's needed to remind you how Filipino she is.
- Some grammatical issues here and there but hey that's nothing to trip over dude it's still exceedingly above average.
- You really went off and copied my whole shit and didn't think I would notice I guess? The effort at which you've gone to mimic my writing style is absurd. There's so many proveyed-isms in here it's insane, what with the calling the character pathetic when they die, emphasizing irrele

Comment proveyed

im the bitch with the sauce, apparently

Review shrinkydink

Very obviously a copy of Shrunken at a Club, most deaths are just a copy of the deaths from that game but what I can say is the original deaths here are pretty good, if the author didn’t copy the other game it would be easily a 4 or even 5 star game but because of it’s plagiarism and down right uncreative attitude it deserves at most a 2 star.

Again the original content is really good and if there was only original content this game would be great but you know the issue by now, also the author better change the “You see a Latina and a Black” line that HighImpactMoth pointed out.

Also for the love of god can we as game makers fix the ‘Take’ function, you obviously know how to take the function out so please make sure you do it for all items, also if you don’t have anything to write don’t leave a function in that remains default like Look being left as “Nothing out of the ordinary” it’s so annoying and lazy.

Comment Rc17

I agree with Proveyed comment. not a huge deal but it was kinda odd to refer to them only as "Latina" or "Black".

Comment proveyed

also i know what youre doing lol

Comment proveyed

“you see latina and a black”

out. this aint it. rename them something more tasteful and provide their race when you examine them

Comment HighImpactMoth

love your game so far and would love to see it develop, my only advice I can give would be when you go east to the Latina and the black woman to either change the name black to black woman or change the prefix to something else as it currently says "You can see latina and a black."

It had me confused to what a black was but I'm sure it's just a issue you missed while testing the game

Comment Scarcity

Sorry for the delay, but it's fixed now.

Comment Ava_xxx

> climb in sandwich
You climb up the pillowly bread, the slabby meat, the lush greens and finally reached the top. Almost instantly, the worker places the top slice of bread directly on you, your futile attempts to get noticed by the worker unnoticed. You were handed to a woman, little did she know she was getting much more than a sandwich.
Error running script: Error compiling expression 'inside sandwich': Unknown object or variable 'inside sandwich'

When climbing in the sandwhich. Also can't seem to get to the east counter. Otherwise, very clean and nice writing^^

Comment Cramberries

Add some futa or guys :^)

Comment Scarcity

The bugs have been fixed, and I've taken your suggestions into consideration. Thanks for the feedback.

Comment Noisy

As far suggestions go, I think it'd be neat if you named, and possibly even numbered, the deaths. Also, some sort of update log is a must for a WIP game this good.

Comment Noisy

This is damn good so far. Can't wait to see more.
I did encounter a glitch, and also a possible oversight, though. Once you climb on top of your chair, even if you climb back down the crush event will still play. And when you climb onto the MILF's chair you can't climb back down, you're forced to enter her thong.

Comment Bleb

Short but very, very sweet. Can't wait to see more.

Comment Ava_xxx

Also:

> approach MILF
Error running script: Error compiling expression '': SyntaxError: Unexpected end of fileLine: 1, Column: 1

Comment Ava_xxx

I'd like to see some interactions that also don't instantly lead to death. Like a vore scene that goes on but gives you the change to live and escape on your own for example.

Comment Ava_xxx

Good shit. Interested in seeing more rooms and interactions added. Perhaps some changing room, bathroom and snack bar interactions?