Victorian Detective 3 by peter123

You're a great detective living in Victorian London. Your internal monologue will guide you by clicking on links in the body of text as you investigate a grisly murder.

Your eidetic memory is represented by your ability to reread all the story you've experienced...

Your intensely fast analyzing ability is represented by your unlimited time between choices...

Your vast knowledge is represented by the internet...

London needs you!


Please comment and rate my games, and if you enjoy the Victorian Detective series I would be happy if you voted on which game you thought was the best. Follow the link below to vote.

http://strawpoll.me/6505661
Review TheVampurr
27 Jan 2023
I LOVE this game! I especially love how you showed the perspective of Mr Burlap as well.

Review Spookypooky13
10 Nov 2022
Really fun! I feel like I messed up the most with my deductions on this one than the other two but that's on me not paying enough attention to the information.

Review wuxunyaoye
25 Dec 2021
Wonderful game, but my English is poor pitifully.

Review Bravo
19 Jul 2021
Love the deductive reasonings you have to make with the clues that are given, absolutely great series, maybe a part 4?

Review IFireblaster7
11 Feb 2021
PLEASE DO A NO.4!!!

Review hsh
17 Jul 2020
Good game.

08 Jul 2020
This text adventure's mystery and old-timey theme doesn't fit with my style. Sure, the start of the game is OK, but one of the links glitch out. 2/5 - quite bad

Review Savio
21 Jun 2020
The third-best one

Review Maxud Kuper
10 Feb 2020
Thank you very much! Love it!

Comment Maxud Kuper
10 Feb 2020
Brilliant idea! Thank you!
I've heard of you from the Luke's English Podcast. Waiting for next stories!

Review NealLeo0608
16 Sep 2019
Fluent narrative and great choices of words.

Comment mehdiarroub
15 Sep 2019
good story

Review vanaelin
12 Aug 2019
Love Victorian Detective! I wish there were more!

Review WarriorsSN
29 Jun 2018
my fav of all four games fo sho! anyways im super impressed, very clever plot and keeps me entertained.

Review Askerit
26 Apr 2018
Well I have played 4 of the Victorian Detective games and I found them all to be very clever and entertaining.

Comment peter123
14 Dec 2017
M8rx7

To put a link in the text of a gamebook, I press the "page" button to the right of the text, then type whatever I want the link to read. Then you'll have the option to add the link to any page you've made.

I'm glad you like the series

Comment M8rx7
11 Dec 2017
Love this series
How do you add links to the bodies of text?

Comment reallycooldude
28 Sep 2017
holy shit that was awesome

Review MissCass
06 Aug 2017
I really love this series! Sharpens my mind and every choice has a huge impact!

23 Jul 2017
Very good game! Just like the other one though, when I click the back button, it turns white and I can't proceed. But the game was very fun til that point. You have a talent. :)

Review pendares
23 Jun 2017
just awesome!!!!

Review rosethorn08
16 Jan 2017
Really enjoyed this one. Also really enjoyed the addition of calculations and whatnot, which I'm sure would be part of his investigative process. I liked the story a lot and game play is fun. I never get everything right, but that is part of the fun :D

07 Dec 2016
Awesome. Very well researched.

Review Tamzy
27 Oct 2016
Another great game, considerably longer and more complicated than the first two. Great story, great writing. :)

13 Oct 2016
Hey...I know you, you're that Arthur Conan Doyle guy, right?

Review WarlordofRome
13 Sep 2016
Another excellent entry in the series.

Review DarkKnight66
29 Jul 2016
PLEASE CONTINUE ZOMBOLOCAUST!

Comment DarkKnight66
29 Jul 2016
PLEASE CONTINUE ZOMBOCALYPSE!

Review Reccho
28 Jun 2016
Damn these games are fun

Review Mason123
10 Jun 2016
Binge-played the entire Victorian Detective series just today for the first time and they are truly fantastic. The sheer dedication that goes into these games is remarkable and the final products are of such a high quality. This was my favourite by far, the story felt much longer and therefore more fulfilling to complete, though my one issue sometimes is that often the correct answer is justified well, but it's very easy to pick the wrong answer when you can't find anything contradicting it directly if that makes sense. So so you can sometimes miss one small clue pointing to the right answer and end up thinking the answer is something different because it seems logical based on what knowledge you did collect.

22 May 2016
Amazing! 11/10
I played all three of the victorian detective series, and I was amazed at the creativity put into each one. I don't understand how one cannot rate a 5 star for something like this.

Review boychester
20 Jan 2016
Awsome! I love it.

Review Staraxia
01 Jan 2016
Absolutely blown away by the awesome gameplay of this series! It did teach me that being Sherlock was not an easy job though. Can't wait for more!

Review PakkiAttakki
06 Nov 2015
Excellent game!

I've played the trilogy and am thirsty for more. I look forward to more mysteries from the author. Thank you, peter123!

Review TheLavaRealm
12 Oct 2015
Makes you feel like sherlock

Comment TheLavaRealm
12 Oct 2015
PLS MAKE MORE GAMES!

Comment Cardboard413
06 Oct 2015
WOOT!
i just finished playing(ive been busy with school & stuff), and i am proud to say..
I AM A DEDUCTIONIST!
how did i do it, you ask?
BABY, I WAS BORN THIS WAY!

Review Cardboard413
03 Oct 2015
five stars!

Comment Cardboard413
03 Oct 2015
i just want to say that I LOVE VICTORIAN DETECTIVE! <3
ive played the other ones too and i love them!
i especially liked in victorian detective 2, where we got to play different perspectives.
i am really looking forward to this one, too.
i love how well made the games are, as well as your fabulous art, and descriptiveness.
i like mardler, too.
i would very much enjoy if you continued to make more, but if you can't i understand!

Review MangoCat
19 Sep 2015
I love this game every time I play it! It makes you think really hard for each question. Also, your pictures are super nice! (I wish I could draw people like you. I'm only good with cats. XD) MAKE MORE IN THE SERIES, PLEASE!!!!!!

17 Sep 2015
Loved it! Even better than the previous two adventures!

Review TheProcess
15 Sep 2015
I loved it!

Review TheSmurtMurt
17 Jul 2015
I am a huge fan of the other games in this series, however this one did not meet my expectations. While in the other games, every conclusion could be backed up with evidence, in this one, some conclusions seemed a bit far fetched. there wer also a feew gramar issuz. What a heartbreaking ending to the otherwise soulful series.

Review viky
13 Jul 2015
Fantastic as always, though I would suggest more build-up and details for the ending. It seemed a bit sudden(this goes for Victorian Detective 2 as well).

Comment taya22994
19 Jun 2015
i can't play

Review Ryuzaki
30 Apr 2015
Loved it. Best text game I've ever played. Exactly whata I was looking for.

Review MisterPibb316
28 Apr 2015
Yet another very good entry in the Victorian Detective series, which seems to be the best-written original GameBook series that the Quest engine has to offer. Like any good mystery does to its viewers, you'll find yourself on the edge of your seat waiting to see how the story proceeds, and ultimately, wraps up.

Review HappyPie
03 Apr 2015
Out of all of the games in this series, this is pretty much the most challenging. But I love it!

28 Mar 2015
Yet another great game. Though, not one of my favorites, it is very interesting.

Review eragon
15 Mar 2015
This one of the best games I've plade so far. I hope there will be another one. Good job with this game.

Review DaNiX88
23 Feb 2015
It preserved the atmosphere and intensity of its preceding counterparts, though there were more spelling and grammar errors uncorrected. Also, some of the options seemed a little too far-fetched and a bit chancy. All in all, this was a great series that I highly recommend to anyone that has a scientific, historical interest or an interest in mystery novels.

Great work!

Review maisonhawke
19 Feb 2015
This is quite astonishing! The whole vibe of the game is mysterious, and it makes you feel like a real detective. Very Sherlock Holmes-like (which is probably intended). You must make more, my dear man! Arthur Conan Doyle is dead, but you still live. So please make more of these, cause YOU'RE FRIGGIN AWESOME

Review joedithx
05 Feb 2015
just great!

Review danaburgerrr
19 Jan 2015
I was really excited to see that you made another one of these! the stories are always so interesting and detailed. you're a great writer, and these adventures are so much fun. I liked this one, especially the "heartless" storyline, but I felt like some of the deductions were a bit far-fetched. a few times, I didn't feel that there was enough substantial evidence to make a rational conclusion, and that the explanations for coming to those conclusions were a little non-believable. other than that, I love this format and the worlds you create. great game.

16 Jan 2015
This is another really fantastic sequel to the Victorian Detective series.

I want to give it four and three quarters of a star, but I can't, so I'll give it five instead. Where Part III lost a quarter of a star for me is that in the first two parts, everything could be solved by being observant, researching, and using logic, whereas I felt in this part, for some of the puzzles you just had to make a lucky guess. There weren't many of these puzzles, and perhaps you could in fact solve all of the puzzles through logic. If this is the case, please accept my deepest apologies!

Anyway, congratulations on another excellent game, and I hope you keep writing this series. You have already written three brilliantly entertaining, challenging, and original games.

P.S. I love the artwork!

Review Ryan Lester
06 Jan 2015
The single best game I have ever played.

Review Alo The Great
04 Jan 2015
Best "text" game I've ever played! Please continue the series!!! (I'm sure other people agree...)

Review THEBanana316
31 Dec 2014
Awesome. Write more. Please write more.

Review Stamina4Days
30 Dec 2014
I love these games. Anyone who gives you anything less than a 5, is either Jelly (because they can't do what you do), or they are Butthurt (because they got a low score...you know....cause they may be dumb and stuff). Keep up the awesome work, my dude.

Review SivD1
19 Dec 2014
Very good, I love this trilogy. Though I have to say, I think this was my least favourite to date.

It's odd, because it featured some of its most clever deductions, but also some of its silliest. I thought that bringing the chases back was a good addition, and some of your puzzles were very satisfying and made perfect sense. Though I thought Claire's character was a bit OTT, and could have been toned down a bit. Also, (spoilers here), I knew Quentin was the killer as soon as we first met him in the bar, so it kind of took me out of the experience as I said "Look! He's right there!"

Overall, I still enjoyed it. Great length, very little grammatical errors, and enjoyable throughout.

Review Renagrade
07 Dec 2014
Well written, clever, and pretty much altogether brilliant! I know that this is a really good game because I'm bad at it and I still enjoy it! :)

Review haveabet
07 Dec 2014
Love this trilogy, got a mark of 33 in this third adventure. Hoping that you produce more

06 Dec 2014
fair enough, then. I'll give you an extra half star as an apology for my lack of chess mastery though I have played it in real life.

Review jdpjdpjdp
06 Dec 2014
Just played the entire trilogy. Some of the best gamebooks I've played, just based on the sheer thought that went into them. I got a 34... would have been 35, but I intentionally made the incorrect last choice and let the bastard die! Great games, anyone who likes to think while playing will love them.

Review ejm29
06 Dec 2014
Another great game making this a fantastic trilogy. This is a must play!

Review Ziege
05 Dec 2014
Another great part of the Victorian Detective series, personally I liked this one even better than the second.

Comment peter123
05 Dec 2014
Larry (first dude to rate the game),

SPOILER

When a pawn reaches the last rank in a game of chess, it is promoted to a queen, or any other piece you want. That's not a glitch, that's how chess works.

That's unfortunate that you gave me a star off for that, dawg

04 Dec 2014
Overall I liked it but there is a glitch in the introduction...according to the picture you inserted of the chess game the player uses a pawn to place the Black King in checkmate, but in the picture the pawn turns into a queen and but in the previous two moves the queen was already removed from the game. If the final move was a pawn, It would be impossible to place the Black King in Checkmate.

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