Fatal Island Part 1 by Renagrade

You are jolted awake by a thunderous rattling noise. It takes you a minute to realize where you are. You're in a 747 airplane on your way to New York City, and your plane is about to go down.

Find a way to survive the plane crash and make it to shore.

There ARE multiple ways to complete the game.

THANK YOU FOR 20,000! :O :D That's just crazy!

If you have the time, I would REALLY appreciate a review and/or comment! :)

PART 2!!- http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/fcmflyyhe0kzbu6436zeea/fatal-island-part-2

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Review Chloe S.

14 Dec 2022

This game was amazing, gripping and now all i need to do is find part 2! or if its not up i am waiting, i loved it that much! :0

Review SteamOwl

07 Feb 2022

It's very intriguing, I like it! :)

Review broadwaydude

25 Oct 2021

This is the game that made me want to create gamebooks. The writing is immersive and the choices are impactful. The stakes keep the game engaging, and the second part makes this collection a gem. Thank you for your games!

Comment Venti

03 Jun 2021

I try to save everyone, which might not be the best option, but I feel so guilty if I don't. This is fun so far, though! I'll write another comment when I made more progress! :)

Review SmallPixelBoat

05 Nov 2020

I loved it.
I'm just sad I couldn't actually save the girl-
(I think I might have figured out how now? Yay :3)

Comment OOFididitagain

14 Apr 2020

Cool I like it alot

Review silver willow the warrior cat

10 Mar 2020

im checking this out sounds good

Review Swiftthunder

21 Dec 2019

This is so cool! I can’t wait for the second one!

Review Hatchstripe

21 Oct 2019

Loove it! Can't wait until part 2!

Review DimensionLord

01 Aug 2019

Nice! I like the idea!

Review dw817

21 Jun 2019

Man ! Now THIS is a survival game ! Very impressed. No fancy fonts, music, or graphics to get in the way. Just make the right choice. The only choice in many cases, and survive the consequences.

Excellent work. Looking forward to more rapid-fire games of this caliber.

Review sebastianali

09 Mar 2019

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Review Effect

23 Sep 2018

Very short, but intriguing. Nice work. And Part 2 is awesome.

Review Golden PenGirl

18 Jul 2018

It keep me wanting for more!

Review karinchan999

29 May 2018

Amazing game! I thought it was long so I braced myself and settled down in bed, leaning on the wall to make myself comfortable. It was like watching a pilot episode of Walking Dead that I was cliffhanged when I finished it. It's a really great game! Keep it up!

Review Awkwardudette

14 Feb 2018

I love it, Renagrade!

The storyline is great and I love how you wrote it.

The game is exciting too! :D

Comment toganico

26 Nov 2017

no such thing as largx/smx or not, largx s inferior shtx. nst as think what to sx or what to sx. say/can say anyx nmw and it can all b perfx

Review asdfzxh

25 Nov 2017

Mendez wrong,idiot. no such thing as havx or not wx. except u, others say/can say anyx nmw

Comment asdfzxh

25 Nov 2017

Mendez wrong,idiot. no such thing as havx or not wx. except u, others say/can say anyx nmw

Review Sazzle

17 Nov 2017

my first game here loved it, both of them

Comment Totally SANS

04 Nov 2017

fun game like the intensity

Review PressStartToPlay

30 Aug 2017

Very exciting game!

Comment LunaMoon35

27 Jun 2017

I SURVIVED!!

Review CrackedMind_

12 Jun 2017

Really enjoyed this, I hope you continue to make more, going to save some skin now XD

Review TigerLily13

05 Jun 2017

This game was great! Those choices really made me think.

Review Madcap

26 May 2017

I loved it, though it should have been longer.

Review alesgrbec

22 May 2017

Played part 1 and 2 now... I'm amazed by this game, please do a part 3.

Review Juny

23 Apr 2017

Could have been longer

Review Mendez

30 Nov 2016

i have no words

Comment Febster

02 Nov 2016

Its good, i did part 2 as well its really good but hard on part 2. I had to restart so many times on pasrt 2 until i finally got to the checkpont.

Comment frazzlebluetigeer

21 Sep 2016

really short but it was good

Review kitnkabootle

06 Aug 2016

Really short.

Review DraconisAngelis

28 Jul 2016

Very interesting, I quite like it. Those moral decisions though, a bit tough, but I think I'm alright for now. Off to part 2! :P

Review Azura Kirigaya

27 Jul 2016

Cool! I enjoyed it!

Review COOKIE CRACKERS

24 Jul 2016

I Love It YAY

Review phynnd

30 Jun 2016

This game reflects my real decision in real life situation

Review Laijakis

23 Jun 2016

Might contain spoilers:

I really enjoyed this! It was a bit too short but nonetheless entertaining :)
It was interesting to see that you didn't focus too much on the survival aspect as you did on survivors' guilt and moral choices.

I managed to save the girl (in my second try *cough*) but left the man to die when the shark showed up.

Comment Draco_the_Dragon

23 May 2016

This game gives a view of your real self

Review Woodelf 12

15 May 2016

excellent. loved playing the game.

Comment Woodelf 12

15 May 2016

great job. loved playing it!

Comment NeuroticMoxx

29 Apr 2016

I would love to play it but like one other person has said, it's really hard to read! Could you perhaps make the text lighter, or the background lighter? :-)

Review Franceybean

28 Apr 2016

Brilliant! Not quite as good as he 2nd one, but still deserves 5 stars.
Maybe would be better if a little longer.
You should make a third one!

Review VyxonGaming

18 Apr 2016

Good. The element to surprise is key in short stories and this certainly had it.

There are 2 big reasons we have not rated this 5 star. 1 as it is too short and 2 we would recommend you put in the option to go back a page instead of starting from the beginning after death.

Overall we enjoyed this story and we would recommend.

Review Shadowmere106

17 Apr 2016

really good. i liked it. Cant wait for part II!

Review MAsterHusaam

17 Apr 2016

AMAZING great storyline great drama AMAZING!

Comment kennyp

11 Apr 2016

Great game, awesome story, oh wait it's just a story but it's still awesome!

Review windcarlos

02 Apr 2016

Great story !

Review SunData

28 Mar 2016

It was pretty good but you cant save the little girl no mater what you do

Review aporou99

23 Mar 2016

Very cool i just like feel in there

Review Rio-

26 Nov 2015

It was a little on the short side, but still quite amazingly made. I loved all the different endings and the aspects of saving people. I'd have to admit that I saved no one on my first go lol.

Review BeggerStager

26 Nov 2015

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Comment BeggerStager

26 Nov 2015

Really nice details of the text. It wasn't too long and your sentences had the main points, so it wasn't much of a burden to read.

Review Chai Hai

20 Nov 2015

I wish it was longer. It was succinct, and I'm glad I saved two people! Will be heading over to part 2!

Review Kange

07 Nov 2015

Your story telling is fantastic.
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I died a little inside when I tried to pull the girl up and she fell. It's so captivating I could easily put myself in that plane and situation. Phenominal. On to part two!

Review kilco

23 Oct 2015

This was awesome pumped to jump on the second one right away!

Review IdleMold5

02 Sep 2015

This is a great story and can't wait to play part 2, gotta do that NOW!!!

Review Bandini

17 Jun 2015

I like it ^^

Review RedArremmer

06 Jun 2015

A fun and all round nice gamebook! It's fun and also shows that to survive, you can't help the weak (unlike some movies). It's nice albeit easy and short, although I know myself that it ain't easy to make a gamebook. Even one as short as this!
Great Job!

Review Decoded360

02 Jun 2015

That was great! I love how the different endings are set up.
The only reason this isn't a 5 star review is because of how short it is, and a few spelling errors, though there is nothing major- I do realize this has a second part, but the length of this part was a little short for me.

Comment Jango

01 Jun 2015

Why isnt it loading for me?

Comment caronte

24 May 2015

Capezzoli infuocati

Comment Hydro

10 May 2015

My first time doing a text adventure was really good thanks.

Review Mac Ewing

30 Apr 2015

I really liked it! I'm only now trying to get back into text-adventures, so a short story like this was just what I was looking for!
I found myself honestly questioning my choices - self-preservation or mercy. I find it impressive you could get me that invested that quick. Good job!

Review MisterPibb316

25 Apr 2015

A really effective thriller that also happens to be really short. What's here is something that a lot of CYOA game authors could learn from, though!

Comment Epsilon01

20 Apr 2015

short and lovely

Review Epsilon01

20 Apr 2015

cool and entretaining, keep up the good work

Comment bionicle_fanatic

02 Apr 2015

I love it! 😁 Now to play chapter II, totally hooked 😆

Review HakuMasarugi

31 Mar 2015

It was great for a short game, and I'll be playing number 2 now. I'm not too big on text-based survival, but this one has really caught my attention!

Comment HaMoody SparkZz

20 Mar 2015

Amazing game .. I Really enjoyed it !!!!

Comment SalBearBrand

23 Feb 2015

The background's green, the text is black. Can't see it well enough. Maybe the text should be a lighter color?

Review DaNiX88

17 Feb 2015

A few spelling errors, but I really enjoyed this game. Short and sweet... and on to the next one!

I KNEW there was a reason to listen to the safety instructions on the plane in real life!

It had me really looking forward to playing the next game of this series.

Good job!

Review BraydonG

15 Feb 2015

In very good detail. I liked how if you wanted to do whatever it would not work. It instead required you to think.

Review Ranique

27 Jan 2015

Another game I will thoroughly enjoy
unfortunetly i didn't save anyone

looking forward to part 2 wish me luck!!!

-me

Review Marzipan

02 Jan 2015

It's been mentioned that the game is short, but I didn't have a problem there. It's a story about surviving a plane crash and the length is just right for a situation that in reality would play itself out in just a few minutes. I appreciate that the choices and consequences were (mostly) logical and the writing was just descriptive enough to make it clear what was going on without distracting the player with unnecessary details in what's meant to be a fast-paced life or death situation.

Though I did run across a few typos, which is perhaps more damning in a short game than it would be in a longer one:

See? you think as you begin to doze off again, we're fine!. (the period at the end is not required)

The whole plane rattles uncontrolably, and you begin to panic. no plane is meant to withstand this kind of turbulence. ('uncontrollably' is misspelled, and you forgot to capitalize the next sentence)

"W-What happened? What's going on?". (the period doesn't belong there)

Grab some suplies ('supplies')

The other survivors are too weary to care and don't say anything back as you grab ahold of their floatation device. ('flotation')

And (SPOILER WARNING) I admit it did bug me a little that the best ending was achieved by what would otherwise be the highly...unrecommended action of taking time to paw through luggage while standing in a metal tube that's in the process of sinking in the ocean.

Review I.Q Incorporated

01 Jan 2015

I liked this. The choices made sense and fitted. The only problem was it was too short. I also like that you couldnt save everybody or maybe you can? Thanks for reading.

Review peter123

31 Dec 2014

Really good logical choices that make sense! It bugs me in games when the choices are sort of ridiculous and both sound equally good or bad, making them just a 50/50 guess, but in this game it was a lot of moral choices, a lot of saving your energy and time vs. saving other people, which I really like!

Really wish the game was longer, and I might add some visuals, sounds or a scoring system (maybe rank how heroic or tired you are or something)

Good game! Time for part 2!

Review Darkswifter

28 Dec 2014

Amazing. The punctual text kept me on edge for the whole of it. It also has lots of options and an excellent ending! Looking forward to part 2!

Comment Renagrade

24 Dec 2014

@MADDOG50K Thank you! The next part should be longer :)

Comment MADDOG50K

24 Dec 2014

really good game wish it was like 100 times longer tho really got into it keep it up

Comment Renagrade

23 Dec 2014

Thank you so much everyone! This is #3 on the top rated RPG games! And it's nearing 400 plays. That's awesome! :)

Review Odie_da_Bossé

20 Dec 2014

Really great, Renagrade. The text wasn't to lengthy, a sense of rush and urgency was within the game; I liked it. Want more!

Review GJ

07 Dec 2014

Very great game! I love how you write and the different endings. Also I liked the colors you used, they make it easier for me to read. And the best of all: There is going to be a second part. If it is going to be only half as good as this one, it'll deserve a 5/5 too. Very well done!