sword masters 2 by emojo

Comment Tai

stop fighting this is sad...

Guys dont be immature, emojo, if he wants to critique, he can, but DePaw, cool down ok? This is for comments, things like "nice try but fix this and this and etc... not "im working on an rpg thats 150kb!"

you gave a good critique in the begginging but dont waste space talking to this emojo guy if you dont think he deserves it...

Comment emojo

i can say the same and im only on lite version.

Comment DePaw

I'm allowed to post negative reviews if I feel the game is bad. You really should try to write things properly if it's a text game. I've been using quest for 3+ years now, I've made many games just not put them on here. I'm making a online rpg which is about 150kb big so far, can you say the same?

Comment emojo

dude.
you havent even made a game so shut up and get off everyones back.
i went to the review part of the main page and found that you have written the
most reviews and most are negative.

Comment DePaw

Once again no capital letters and a new line after each sentence. A room where all 8 exits go to the same place, then bit of moving around and you've finished the game. With lovely descriptions like "well done you have killed drak. walk in any direction." And many forgotten full stops, total of 5 rooms. For a game that claims to be "brilliant", I was disappointed.

Overall: 1/5. Tips: Remember your punctuation, more descriptions, more involved story line.