Z-Day : The War by TheAllen5554

Review Mango art

I have a few things to say about this. A lot of the options are unrealistic, there is only one ending from what I can see, the only options you don't die from are the selfish ones, it's barely descriptive at all, and it's full of spelling errors. But.. good luck on your next game book

Review StoryBox

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Review AltSk0P

It still needs a good polish to become an interesting game. More interesting situations, choices, descriptions - so far it looks more like a scratch, than an actual TA.

Review zoeyasminesmith

great story !!