The Walking Dead: The Story Of Catherine by Sreer

Review LikeABoss!

I really liked it. Only problem is that the paragraphs are too long. So I kinda get antsy. It shows promise, that is true. Yet I kinda feel like the action is lost in all the words. It's still exciting though. Just don't make it so wordy.

Comment Sreer

Hello, in case anyone even reads this:

As you will probably have guessed by now, this game will not be updated. This has a couple of reasons: I felt unsatisfied with my writing and the story in general, the dialogue seemed fake, the Episode is way too short, there were too few choices actually affecting something...you name it. But the most important reason is, perhaps, that it is impossible to have all storylines in one game, like I intended to do at first. I completley lost sight of everything that is going on in my editor, which is, as you can guess, not the best thing. Also, another important thing: The story will not be branched out as much anymore. Sorry, but it's simply impossible for me to pull that off. There simply can't be 1000 storylines by the end of it all.

This is, however, not saying that I cancelled this project. I have recently played a very good game made in Twine which made me want to continue this story, but sadly I'm a complete and helpless noob when it comes to programming, which is why I will continue the story here.
I will now release the game in Episodes (like any sane person would do anyway lol), and I will take this opportunity to completely change the story aswell.

Thanks for reading, I'll try to get the Episode out as soon as possible, but I won't promise any release dates anymore, you see how that turned out.

Review SivD1

This story showed promise!

I'll get the bad out of the way first. It didn't seem like the story progressed very much (though I understand this is only the beginning, my first episode was similar). Also, the characters are pretty under-developed as of right now (though I'm sure that will be fixed later on). Also, some of the lines seemed a bit unnatural, and maybe a bit of an overuse of profanity.

Time for the good! It seems like you took your time detailing the story, and making it seem as realistic as possible. Also, I only found two grammar/spelling mistakes, so a free cookie for you! I also liked how it tied into the show/comics a bit there at the end.

All in all, like I said, this shows promise!

Comment Sreer

Thanks for all the support I got so far! It encourages me to write on.
I have decided to branch the story out and indeed will have several storylines. As you probably realize, this will take a HUGE amount of time, but it will pay off (at least I hope so).
It will be done before this year ends, probably much sooner. The first of the six new storlines was wrapped up today, the next should be way faster done, because they are already layed out in my mind.
Thanks for every play and download, and for the nice reviews!
I hope you check back once Episode 2 rolls by.

A little teaser: Episode 2 is called 'On The Run'

Review MrFRZ

Very great story, although it was short, I am only writing this review of the first episode because it's all that you have released at the moment. I hope you make many more chapters and if this was a test to see if this game might succeed, it passed! I can tell if you continue the story and add more episodes, that this game might get really popular on this site. The only thing I suggest is a proof read of every page as you write them to remove errors, there are only a few I noticed, and also make sure you have your information down. (When you see the gun in the car door you say it's fully loaded, but you only use two shots before its empty). If you continue the story to have a bunch of different endings, it can get more difficult and confusing as you move on. I am working on a game very similar to this myself. But other than these minor things, it's a great start and I cant wait to see more.

Review TheHatMan

I love all of these Walking Dead based games that are popping up, I've been working on a long project which is my own and I just can't get enough of these games. I like where this story is going, I hope in the future you make some more of these. Nice work.

Review nob0nez

I really love this story. Cant wait till the next chapter comes out!