This is a creepy little tale I wrote a number of years ago, while playing with the rhythm of the words and the fable format. I think it actually makes a better gamebook than a short story. Enjoy!
Created with Squiffy
Version History:
1.1 (4 Oct. 2015)
-added more interactivity at the story's end
1.0 (3 Oct. 2015)
Wow, twist ending. The one thing that made me not give it five stars was the format, I found it a little clunky, and the changing of the words halfway through each section made it a little tricky for me. I loved the story though! It was very dark :)
I do suggest maybe using less passages, and maybe switch to twine? Otherwise the story was very good.
Fantasy
Comedy
Horror
Educational
Sci-Fi
Mystery
Puzzle
Simulation
Surreal
RPG
Slice of Life
Historical
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Romance
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